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Post by Nicole on Oct 7, 2009 5:11:53 GMT -5
at the moment, I'm trying to figure out how i could make my character stay at an institute for students, but so far, i only give her more to leave. so it';s not working well.
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Post by Ryphna St-John on Oct 7, 2009 10:41:10 GMT -5
Reasons to stay somewhere even if you just dream to leave: - Friends - Change is scary (and most people won't make change happen if they are not forced) - Price to pay higher then "possible" gain (bad mark, money, losing someone or something, have problem with family or autority) - Doubt I guess the question is also: why was she there in the first place? Hope it help
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Post by luigilargofan1332 on Oct 7, 2009 11:26:02 GMT -5
You know what? I'm stuck at this scene - not because I don't know what happens, but because I can't figure out how to write it.
Chapter four is basically my erotica chapter. The first part is a very loveless, lust-fueled scene and the second part is a contrast with two characters who truly love each other. They WILL NOT cooperate with me! I know exactly what happens and they won't let me write it!!!
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Post by Nicole on Oct 7, 2009 12:22:39 GMT -5
talk them into letting you write it.
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Post by luigilargofan1332 on Oct 7, 2009 14:27:07 GMT -5
They're being all snotty about it...
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Post by Nicole on Oct 7, 2009 15:26:56 GMT -5
ask why they won't co-operate, an if they have their reasons, you may could use it in the story
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Post by luigilargofan1332 on Oct 7, 2009 19:03:49 GMT -5
They just want to make it difficult for me. Ando is quite the prankster...
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Post by Ryphna St-John on Oct 7, 2009 19:05:34 GMT -5
well if they don't want that scene maybe you could postpone writing it... Jump over it with a one line sumary and keep writing something else.
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Post by luigilargofan1332 on Oct 7, 2009 19:27:14 GMT -5
That's actually what I did. I just stopped writing that chapter and now I'm on to five
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Post by Vengeance the Dark Mistress on Oct 7, 2009 19:58:35 GMT -5
I just haven't felt inspired. I thought I loved my story. Now- I'm indifferent.
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Post by luigilargofan1332 on Oct 7, 2009 19:59:08 GMT -5
NUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Kini of the Flesh on Oct 7, 2009 20:59:24 GMT -5
Oh no! Why have you lost the spark Talula?!
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Post by Kini of the Flesh on Oct 7, 2009 21:07:02 GMT -5
I'm about to go on a road trip and I still have the last of the packing to do and tons of other stuff so I may not get to my big goal of around 6,500 for the end of the week buuuuuuuut I'm thinking 10+ hours in a car with naught else to do will help alleviate that issue quite thoroughly. Once the giddiness of going on a road trip wears off, that is!
I finally get to see New York City!!!!
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Post by luigilargofan1332 on Oct 7, 2009 21:44:51 GMT -5
Lucky...I stopped hearing about it so I forgot to save.
I really wanted to go with you guys...
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Post by Nicole on Oct 8, 2009 3:03:11 GMT -5
well, for now i'm quite on schedule. i just need to write to the 9040 words, and them i'm on todays wordscount.
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